Sunday, December 23, 2012

What Makes a Great Suspense Story?

Congratulations to "LS", the winner of Kaylin's giveaway. Thank you to all who participated!

Although I’m a relatively new author when it comes to writing romantic suspense, one suggestion that immediately comes to mind for fellow authors is to begin your story by stating what’s at stake while providing a glimpse at the challenges your hero or heroine are forced to overcome. I love a good mystery and have discovered that mystery authors tend to be more closed mouth and secretive about ultimate sacrifices and goals in their stories. Suspense authors, on the other hand, risk giving too much away by divulging all the elements of their stories way too early, which makes writing in this particular genre a bit of a balancing act.

Secondly, suspense needs to grow through the actions of a strong protagonist while detouring away from the story’s predictable outcome. This is not an easy task to pull off but allows the author the ability to explore multiple points of view while giving insight into the vulnerabilities or flaws of their characters. The suspense author might even draw sympathy from their readers for the villain who grew up on the wrong side of the tracks or the bitter woman who’s been abandoned all her life and is hesitant to trust an ex-lover.

The ability to see inside the minds of characters in this style of writing makes it possible to add thought processes and complex layers while providing the motivation behind pitting the antagonist against the protagonist. Mystery writers are at a distinct disadvantage in this regard as they’re required to keep the antagonist’s identity hidden to the very last minute to extend the drama and excitement of their stories. But whether mystery or suspense, the trick to mastering a great story is to ensure that the reader ultimately has a thrilling experience.

Kaylin will be giving away a print copy of SEVERED THREADS to one person leaving a comment.

Severed Threads is available at:

About the author:
Kaylin McFarren is a rare bird indeed. Not a migratory sort, she prefers to hug the West Coast and keep family within visiting range. Although she has virtually been around the world, she was born in California, relocated with her family to Washington, and nested with her husband in Oregon. In addition to playing an active role in his business endeavors, she has been involved in all aspects of their three daughters' lives - taxi duties, cheerleading coaching, script rehearsals, and relationship counseling, to name but a few. Now she enjoys spending undisciplined time with her two young grandsons and hopes to have many more. 

Although Kaylin wasn't born with a pen in hand like so many of her talented fellow authors, she has been actively involved in both business and personal writing projects for many years. As the director of a fine art gallery, she assisted in furthering the careers of numerous visual artists who under her guidance gained recognition through promotional opportunities and in national publications. Eager to spread her own creative wings, she has since steered her energy toward writing novels. As a result, she has earned more than a dozen literary awards and was a 2008 finalist in the prestigious RWA® Golden Heart contest.

Kaylin is a member of RWA, Rose City Romance Writers, and Willamette Writers. She received her AA in Literature at Highline Community College, which originally sparked her passion for writing. In her free time, she also enjoys giving back to the community through participation and support of various charitable and educational organizations in the Pacific Northwest.

Giveaway ends 11:59pm EST Dec. 23rd. Please supply your email in the post. You may use spaces or full text for security. (ex. jsmith at gmail dot com) If you do not wish to supply your email, or have trouble posting, please email with a subject title of JRS GIVEAWAY to be entered in the current giveaway.


  1. Now that's what I'm talking about. Romantic suspense.has it ALL. Just checked on this book and it sounds good. I read a lot and am always looking for new authors. Would love to win a copy, and it is now on my wish list. Trishleroy49 at gmail dot com

  2. I do enjoy the excitement of wondering what will happen next in mysteries and suspense stories.
    mce1011 AT aol DOT com

  3. I love romantic suspense more than any other, I would love to win and go on an adventure with a new author. Merry Christmas, and

  4. Romantic Suspense is my go to read! I checked out Severed Threads and love the blurb - looking forward to reading it.
    Thanks and Merry Christmas!!

  5. Enjoyed reading the comments. I am always looking for new authors to read. Your book sounds really good and I have added it to my TBR list.

  6. Enjoyed the post and the excerpt posted on your website.
    I noticed that in addition to Severed Threads, there are two other books featuring Rachel Lyons. Are more books planned?

    jtcgc at yahoo dot com

  7. This sounds intriguing.


  8. Enjoyed the post - love finding new authors, especially ones that write romantic suspense! Read the blurb on amazon and this one sounds really great. I'd love to be entered for it.

    mlawson17 at hotmail dot com

  9. Thanks for the great post! Makes more sense now why I like romantic suspense a bit more over straight mystery :) Congrats on the new release and Happy Holidays!


  10. I do find myself feeling for the villain or at least having some understanding of the big why!! Great suspense is priceless.


    1. My thanks to everyone who took the time to read about Severed Threads and leave a comment. In regard to additional books, the answer is yes! There are two books currently in the works in the Threads series. Be sure to visit my website for updates and new release details. From Tokyo, Japan, I'd like to extend my best wishes for a merry Christmas and happy new year, and congratulations to the winning entry!! Kaylin

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